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I stepped into the cold then back into the heat
Locked the doors of my ready truck
Leveled my coffee glanced at the ocean and raced down a dark cold street
I arrived at work arrived under the day
Listening to the morning radio show I pictured people I might see pondered things I might say
I jumped from my truck and checked for unlocked doors
I made eye contact with people I've made eye contact with before
I waved and walked away it was cold it was monday


Twelve hours


I stepped into the cold then back into the heat
Locked the doors of my ready truck
Leveled my thoughts stopped at the store then raced down a dark cold street
I arrived at home close to another day
Listening to the radio show finished a few beers while watching my insane sparsely clothed polar bear neighbors fly fishing knee deep in the bay
I jumped from my truck and checked for unlocked doors
Walked to my home and into the place i stay
Grabbed a beer muted the tv started the cd mix set my alarm and waited for tuesday

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