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into the night


take me away into the night
take my hands, they only bring me evils
ohh rap me in ur warmth, i dont wana see this world any more
carry me gently down that path where i belong, stay close and stray not far
for when the sky comes down, i dont want to be the only one around.

"ohh take me away, take me into the night, i cant stay here nemore"

shut my eyes to the bright figures that haunt ur dreams, open my ears to what they have to say
things change in the darkness, step aside and let me see,
that wall is getting higher, i dont want it to burry me
the vines in these cracks are growing and my time with this world is closing
so hold tight to the night, for we both do not want to be here when its light

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