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Mutilation and terror
| The story goes that a psytchotic deranged lady killer escaped from the most maximum of maximum security prisons. He was servinmg time for multiple murders. Apparently, he liked to stalk people, and when they least expected it, he would come up behind them and slit their throat slowly. He would do it just slowly enough that the person would slowly drown because the blood would slowly fill up the lungs. It was his aim to make the suffering last as long as possible. The whole time while the victim was struggling for breath and life, the man would laugh, ina loud evil way, and just as the unfortunate soul was about to expire he would look into their eyes and kiss the person, the "kiss of death." Anyhow, he also liked to kill babies too, and he would steal them from their guardians and he would pile them all in deep freezes and freeze them to death. When the police finally caught him and searched his house, the basement was filled with bones, and skulls, and half decayed corpses. This was because he was a necrophiliac and like to have intercourse with his victims. Also, when the police found the deep freeze, inside it were about ten frozen babies. So, he was in prison for 15 years, but managed to escape. He ran into the woods, and he was lucky enough that he found a small cottage. He knocked at the door, and a sweet old lady answered. He immediately took his knife out and slit her throat, just enough so she would die a slow painful death, and he put her still moving body in a garbage bag, and threw it in the fire. For2 minutes it moved..... He then licked the blood off of his knife (which was his practice because he was also a vampire), and put it in the sink. It Just so happened that halloween was coming up, and the cold blooded, vampire, sadistic, lady, baby killer dicided to make some "treats" for the kids. He found an old package of cool aid, and he mixed it up and made it, and put it into some small plastic bottles he found. After this he put acid into the cool aid. The next night people came to the ladys door expecting treats. The kids asked where the lady went, and he said she was in the hospital, but that she asked him to give out the treats. He gave every kid a bottle of theacid infected cool aid. That night 50 kids lost their lives, and when the cause was finally dtermined, it was too late because the killer had already left. |
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